zombie sketchdump

Zombie sketch dumpppp. FULL VIEW FOR DETAILS PLEASE!
I needed quick examples of what kind of 'zombie' drawings I will eventually be offering as commissions. :]
These of course, are unfinished--I just added a bit of color to them so you can identify them from each other.

A finished full figure zombie will be paypal ONLY unless you are able to offer up at least 500-700 points for one >_<;; They take me a while to draw, as the proportions are not realistic, and there is a lot of drawn detail and colored detail. Busts and smaller figures will be for cheaper points, probably around 200ish. :]

I wanted to sketch out some OC's of close friends on here--OC's that I have never drawn. :]

Starting from top left to right:
Columbia Kempley Vitious [Harry Potter OC] (c) *MikachuAttack, J.K.Rowling
Aosagi Anzu [Kako no Koouri/Past Ice Story] (c) =ariel-dennise
Beckie Cohan (c) *Becky-McBecka-Pants
Oriane Quentin [Harry Potter OC] (c) *kunoichikat, J.K.Rowling

the one in the bottom right hand corner is a bigger piece I'm working on. Was SUPPOSED to be a self-portrait but it doesn't look like me at all anymore.

So anyway. Sorry if these creep you out hahaha
When I do start zombie commissions, I will be encorporating traits of the character into the actual rot/deformation of the body itself--for example, if you commissioned me to draw Uchiha Sasuke out like this, his eyes would be missing/bloody, and he'd probably have a rotted out heart trailing out of his body as his soul has gone to shits.

Let me know what you guys think--should I make them more "realistic" proportion wise, or is this weird slightly-off style suitable for this kind of thing?